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Title:
Forever
Rating: PG
Warnings: Original character
warning. Not a Mary Sue, though, she really doesn't do much.
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Chapter:
1/1
Notes: Used the Lexicon timeline
for the events of this story.
.~*~.
“Is this your idea of a perfect life, Tom?”
Funny, how a
sentence and a sigh could bring one back to their childhood. It was the summer
of 1938. He’d turned twelve, and while the orphanage had recognized this
by giving him a new set of clothes, he’d found himself wishing that someone
he knew, another child perhaps, would notice. They didn’t.
Well, that was actually too general. One girl had, the quiet one who slept in
the dormitory down the hallway. She was a pretty Muggle, with perfect black
hair that ended neatly at her shoulders, and her name was Katherine. Her dormmates
ignored her; the boys in Tom’s dorm seemingly did as well, as she always
seemed to be on her own during meals or when they were told to go outside.
It was that summer
that they became close; she had been at the orphanage as long as he could remember
but never seemed to fit in with anyone. So, while their peers would romp outside
and run around, they sat against the wall and read or talked.
He’d called her Kay. She just called him Tom.
On his birthday, she had given him a smile. It was more than anyone else his
age had offered, and he’d smiled back. At the end of the summer, he had
taken her hands and promised to come back the next summer, after a year at the
boarding school, and she promised to wait for him.
That was the year that he heard a rumour about the Chamber of Secrets and began
to study it intently; at first, he was just curious. Just wanting to find out
if it existed or not. Something so legendary–only able to be opened by
Slytherin’s heir? The sorting hat had so quickly placed him in his house
that Tom began to wonder. By the end of the year, he promised himself to find
it, to open it.
That was the
summer that he and Kay had grown closer still; they were thirteen and curious
and foolish, to have fallen in what they imagined was love. Her eyes–he
sighed. They had been the purest of greens, purer than even the grass around
the orphanage. But so many other colors were in them–blues and reds and
yellows and blacks. They were the deepest eyes that he had ever seen.
And Tom hated himself for falling in love with a Muggle.
The next summer they both turned fourteen; Kay had grown into a beautiful young
woman and Tom knew himself to be growing taller, finally. She had cried when
a guardian at the orphanage had taken him to King’s Cross, and Tom had
kissed her and promised to return. When he did, she was waiting for him.
But that summer
something had changed. On his fifteenth birthday, she had given him a diary,
which he had scoffed at–him, write his precious thoughts where others
could see them? But he had accepted it. She seemed to want to come along with
him to his boarding school, and became angry when he told her that she could
not; she asked why she had to wait for him every school year. And he had angered
her more by telling her that no matter what, she would.
She had asked him that impatient question. “Is this your idea of a perfect
life, Tom?” They had snuck out of their dormitories, and were outside,
staring up at the stars in the sky. Tom had looked at her and looked upward
for the answer so long that she had laughed bitterly and stood to leave. His
reply came as she was walking away, in a whisper that betrayed no emotion.
“Only if it lasts forever.”
He remembered quite clearly the look she’d given him then–disbelief,
hurt. What she said afterward was unimportant, and Tom knew she wouldn’t
be waiting for him in ten months if he returned. He just stared up at the stars.
That year, he’d studied like no year before. Lived in the library. And he found the book that finally made everything add up, and discovered the Chamber. He laughed when the Muggle-born Myrtle died, and only stopped his control on the school when he asked to stay for the summer and Dippet had told him no. Then he had framed a third year and won an award for service to the school, and had been allowed to stay the summer. He turned the diary, his gift from Kay, into a magical dark arts item with a few more weeks of research, and had lived his life in cold. Numbness didn’t hurt as much.
And this was
why, fighting the war, his battles against the Potter boy were never quite fought
with all he had. Those green eyes haunted him, and sometimes the messy black
hair, slicked with sweat or blood or who knows what else, turned into a shoulder-length
cut. He would laugh bitterly at his own weakness when his plots failed, and
Wormtail would never ask; his enemy got an advantage that he couldn’t
even speak of to his followers. He wasn’t supposed to fall in love with
Muggles. He wasn’t supposed to fall in love. He was Voldemort.
But a voice in the back of his head said Tom.
Potter was his angry Kay, out to destroy him before being destroyed. He knew
that someday, at the end, he himself would be the one to fail, the one to slip.
So many Death Eaters were smug in their positions, assured victory, when it
would end up being for nothing.
He opened his
eyes again, coolly regarding the wizard in front of him. He’d known that
Dumbledore would not attack him while his eyes were closed; the old fool never
had been good at playing unfairly.
And the answer rose bitterly, in the back of his throat, as he plucked the wand
that Dumbledore had taken from him off the floor.
“Only if it lasts forever.”
.~*~.
Story copyright © Adrienne Wolter (aka catsncritters) 2003-2004 and onwards. Harry Potter belongs to JK Rowling and WB; Matrix to whoever created Matrix; and ATBG to Klasky Csupo. I do NOT claim them, and am making no money off of this fan fiction.
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